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SwEeTnSeXy18
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0 posted 2004-06-04 12:28 PM



"Ashley"

As you cannot imagine I am lost without you

Since you left it feels very diffrent here

Here I am at work thinking of you not sure what to do

Like a sun you brightned up my world and like a disease something took you away leaving me once again cold and alone

Every where I look I see you, hear your voice and rememember the days we spent and it burns like a fiery acid that your gone and my heart and soul are bleeding for your return

You don't know for two months now that I've felt from getting to know you to wanting to see you more, to waking up and memories of your face being in my dreams, to simply seeing your smile could make me do the same inside and out until I feel I will burst because I feel so complete and at peace even on my darkest day you make me feel this way Ashley Greene

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


© Copyright 2004 Lisa Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
SwEeTnSeXy18
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1 posted 2004-06-05 09:12 PM


This is a very sad poem...but so heartfelt. Just remember, sometimes people come into our lives and stay a long time and other times they are here only briefly, but the ones that touch our hearts the most are ALWAYS with us, even when they are gone. Take care kiddo and keep your head up high.
Love you,
Amy

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


sweet_cute_palestinian04
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2 posted 2004-06-27 07:22 PM


wow,wow,,,this poem is amazing keep up the greatest workk....

I loved it ,i truly did soo much,,,


love and respect

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

SwEeTnSeXy18
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3 posted 2004-06-28 05:07 PM


Thanks for replying to my poem sweet cute palestinian04. I am glad you liked my work, since I feel the same about yours!!   Take Care.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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