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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110


0 posted 2004-05-29 08:11 PM



along to long ago
we never knew to far to fast
along to long ago
we faded souls of dust and ash

how hard it is to end it now
we wish we would,
but we don't know how

the mirth of encroaching insanity
circles near and dear
to me
to rend the thoughts to fein cheer

dabble dabble little boy
play with your soul
children in the street
so young, so fresh
tender meat

love to take me back again
love to take me anywhere
when i were you, we were free
how long to stay here, only me

all we are
is what we were
before,
they told us
what to be

© Copyright 2004 KuruShio - All Rights Reserved
River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-05-30 10:32 PM


Kuru...there's something about this that gives me chills. It's as if you reached inside of my mind and grabbed a thought that I've been trying to forget. well a line or two of this anyway. very good stuff, I like, and I'm adding it.

         - River

Running out of pain

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