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jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2004-05-27 09:27 PM


what do you do when you're no longer happy
in the life you currently live
what happens when the love you recieve
is less hten what you give
how should you feel when you accomplish something
and it seems like nobody cares
or you think the emptiness that you feel
is something that no one else shares
how do you know when it's time to end
a fight that's gone on for years
and where do you get the confidence in yourself
to overcome all of your fears
and why does it feel like the constant worries
may never come to an end
and you can't just be happy with what you have
no matter how much you pretend
how do you conjure up all the strength
to leave and never look back
reclaim your lif you hpes you emotions
and all that you currently lack

© Copyright 2004 jennifer - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
1 posted 2004-05-31 12:29 PM


This poem i found it soo true about life,,and i mean us human beings,,,well there was some mistakes in the misspelled words but this poem is great keep it upp...

lovezz

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
Admit that im right,,!

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