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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Everything is cold Wind blowing steady Sends a chill Colder here now I have less for comfort Digging in deeper Confused Turn, see my shame Freedom never saw All started once Bent now Nothing I can choose My ceramic lips pursed Confused This prison Comfort sold Trapped Heavier burden now Beautiful And I'm asleep Confused No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
beautiful confusing, which makes it good cus it needs a deeper look. I think i kinda understand wat its about now. i enjoyed it cus it sorta painted a picture in your mind. beauitful darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i am confused too man, never any answers huh? Beauty is truth, truth beauty |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
=( I wish everything in this forum was not based on real life. hugs to you bro, and good write =). eor, where have you been? lol. - River Running out of pain |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Darkness- I didn't noticed the picture thing until you said that, and your right. Its like a bubbly wave or something. eor- nice to hear from you and to see you have some new work. This one is kinda confusing but pretty simple to explain. River- does it count if its not about just my life but more of a mixture. GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
well...ok. lol. Running out of pain |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
as always gis an interesting read, now why do i feel like a ceramic doll being sold to a child....  Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
KuroShio- Do you feel like you'll never recieve the respect you feel you should get as an adult, or are you lips pursed assuming your automatically an individual bent on being evil? Just like being looked at as a child until your 40. GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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