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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2004-05-22 09:35 AM

Why am I always hiding from you,
Why am I cowered in fear,
Why don’t I feel trust in you,
Why now, and why here?

Why do I hide myself,
Why can’t I see tomorrow,
Why do I know so much fear,
So much pain and sorrow?

Why can’t I see the bottom of the well,
Why do I even try,
Why don’t I tell you who I am,
Why do I continue to lie?

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-22 10:36 AM

this poem was amazing,AMAZING AMAZING,its like im talking i truly loved it keep wriitting please love and respect

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2004-05-25 04:52 PM

why?

the truth will set you free

Beauty is truth, truth beauty

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

3 posted 2004-05-26 02:28 PM

a really rough point to be at in life. all this mistrust and uncetainty could drive you mad. nice write. I'm feelin it

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2004-05-26 04:36 PM

I can relate all to well to this poem. Well done

Tara

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

5 posted 2004-07-01 02:52 AM

I can really relate. I love the last stanza. Wonderful writing!

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-07-01 06:01 PM

I can also relate. I ask myself the same questions sometimes. Great job, keep it up!

~Alli~

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

7 posted 2004-08-27 02:07 PM

wow....(mouth hanging open) so good. so very very good.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-08-28 11:27 AM

First you must love and trust yourself, and then you give yourself to others expecting nothing in return. By giving without expectations, you free yourself from fear. In giving, you create a cycle of love that will return to you and engulf you within its tide.

Easier said that done, but better tried than not.

Enjoyed your write.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

9 posted 2004-08-28 02:26 PM

I can relate also , but you were probably expecting that. lol This was an amazing write, and i loved the ending.

Cant wait to hear more.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

10 posted 2005-07-21 04:44 AM

That poem was great! I know how well you can write poetry! Why havent you posted in a while? Good choice of words and rhythm! I love ya girl..
*Holly*

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

11 posted 2005-07-21 12:58 PM

I think it says this was posted a few years ago. Kinda cool that someone dug it up and now people are responding and saying how rad it is huh? Nice write. Why face left when you can face right? Why face back when you can face forward?

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stoopid Angel"

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