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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-19 11:00 PM


the tears are falling down my face
i want to scream
so can't tell me you don't love me
i dont need to hear you say you don't love me
please dont tell me
i'd rather live here in my fake world
with my fake smiles
and my fake laughter

why would you kill my dreams?
i dont need that right now
i've been so depressed lately
i cry to know i'm still alive
..drink it up..
my pain,its all for you baby
its all for you..

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
1 posted 2004-05-20 12:25 PM


this is greatt ,,,i really reallly enjoyed it,,everyuthing ur saying is just perfect keep it up..love and respectt

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75
Boise Idaho
2 posted 2004-05-20 01:45 AM


great poem i really liked it...your a very artistic person

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