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0 posted 2004-05-17 12:11 PM



Now life has shown me what it is made of,
I can’ t fight and wish to live long,
I dream not of a perfect life with lots of cash,
Rather I fight on to what I believe is right,

Through the struggles and the pain
I know I will make it in the end,
No happiness is more than I can get
When I know I live a life of a good man,

Please let me hang on to my faith and my soul,
God help me mend this anger and stress,
You are the one, who fulfills wishes and wants,
Then let me lead a life without denial,

At times I choose to give up this fight,
Throw in the gloves and give up now,
But there is something that sparks the flame,
That makes me want to hang in for just one more day,

So many have struggled and made it through in life,
I want to be one of them, who makes it across,
I’ll build my own bridge and supply my own rope,
All I need you to do is watch over me and give me hope,

No more tears I will shed and no more asking I will do,
Just lead me into the divine light of truth and let me bathe,
I am without guidance and without a road to follow,
Maybe I will create my own path towards you and your home.


© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-17 10:44 PM


your faith shines through in this
CrEaTuRe
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2 posted 2004-05-26 01:39 AM


May ure path be made easy with the wishes from those who love ure work ;-)
ViNa

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

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3 posted 2004-05-26 04:22 AM


this poem is very hopeful, nice write

Beauty is truth, truth beauty

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4 posted 2004-05-26 10:25 AM


hey, good write...I have one question though...do you really think you can make your own way to heaven? not trying to pick an argument here, just wondering, because I believe in God too and....nevermind, lol. if you wanna talk about this, will you e-mail me?  just some ideas here and there, if not that's cool too. again, good write. =)

        - River

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