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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-05-14 11:30 PM



Whats it like to be a person
To matter
i don't even know

I just want to be something I can't
i can't
i can't do anything
I'm damned if I do and damned if I don't
If I don't its funner
If I do its right

Can I have a minute of my own life
Can I think for myself
Is there really a promised plan for my life
You're shaving what I thought was me each  
And everyday

Why an I alive?
Amusing punishment
My purpose to be punished
I can't move, breathe, run to live

Another test
Might lead to faith
May die in suicide
There's no limit to this
And I can't remember

In my later days maybe I'll be someone
But for nowI guess I just have to open wide
And take it with praise
Or let you take it
While I sit and watch

On a downward spiral
Open wide for your judgemental self-righteous sentence and
Greed

Tell me I can't and I can't
Just another loser
Then you said I was gay
And destroyed my former sense of self
Available and richly anal
Their eyes are so pretty
I'd love to rip them out
It's control

Return to me
What's already mine
If you want to make my decisions
Then do as I say
Clean the disgust from your ears
And let me live my way

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Defective
Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73
Salisbury NC
1 posted 2004-05-14 11:57 PM


Holy... I love this. Your words match my thoughts and I thank you.

[This message has been edited by Ringo (05-15-2004 01:21 AM).]

KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

2 posted 2004-05-15 12:37 PM


Their eyes are so pretty
I'd love to rip them out

found this humorous and almost something i would say "stop your insolence or i will eviserate you and wear you as a raincoat"

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2004-05-15 10:37 AM


I'm glad you liked it defective.

Yeah violence held inside.  Doesn't it do things to you?  lol.  

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2004-05-15 05:14 PM


hey, you did a pretty good job. sums up everything doesn't it? funny how poems make so much more sense when you know the stories behind them.

      - Bonnie Sue

Running out of pain

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