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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2004-05-14 04:09 PM


Self mutilation of will
hold my pain in a metal box
tie it down and watch it glow
spill the rain on shards of sand
fill this mind with regrets of tomorrow
shaking, burning
hold my hand
feel the ashes falling down
through my winter weathered hair
I sink beneath the sea and drown
slowly breath the dimming air
clouds fall out of a pale black sky
and stars sing haunting melodies
as they fade behind
myths of drows and black fairies

swimming through my false reality
I surface in a fog
yet another world inside of me
yet another dimension of sadness
lost through endless spaces of time
because in this place of worry
time is history and gone
shadowed by thoughts of being near
ever near the passion of you
in only I can gaze into your eyes
hear the beat of another heart
and pray it never dies

do you want to know me?
do you care about these things
that cage me up and set me free?
do you want to know me?
I want to know you
open your heart and let me inside

Running out of pain

© Copyright 2004 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-05-14 04:16 PM


wow.. the imagery in this was amazing... I could almost see everything going on.. wow. I loved this...i think i will save it.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-05-14 11:11 PM


I don't exactly get on everyday anymore partly because my computer seems to have picked up a touch of schizophrenia and turns itself off when it likes.  Its cut as dry as possible.  No fantasy, or pretend world of how great or bad everything is, just real.  Nice piece.  

GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

3 posted 2004-05-15 12:35 PM


a bottle full of awsome, go get drunk on it.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2004-05-15 10:33 PM


thanks guys...greeny, i don't hold it against you, lol, kuru, actually getting drunk doesn't sound very bad right now. then again maybe not. oh well. ttyl.

                   - River

Running out of pain

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