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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-05-13 10:22 AM


I don't believe in god, or fate...
I can not explain to you why the hands on the clock bruise me
as they go about their mechanical routine.
all the wet and textured surfaces, feel like paper cut outs to me.
I'm a plastic figurine,
and I squeak as I trod.
I laugh at all the wrong times.
I don't believe one thing coming out of your mouth.
Its all artificial tampering.

© Copyright 2004 Alexis Smith - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-05-13 04:14 PM


kool. I like it. It was different, and it didnt rhyme, wich is something i like. Amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-05-14 11:19 PM


i used to say my ec-girlfriend and I were plastic people, cause everything seemed kinda off and kinda, not fake but, bizarre to the point that it just didn't seem touchable.  I now do believe in God, and now reality is completely different.  You don't actually have anything in this world ever, because nothing in this world matters.  When you die everything you did or had is entirely meaningless.  I did like the poem though

GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

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