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0 posted 2004-05-11 09:51 PM


The pain I feel
Is not so bad,
But the scares that
Show-
Leave me speechless,

In small armies they
Invade-
Crawling within my head,
An into my arms,

I fight not-
For they will leave,
As quickly as they
Have come,

As my body
Is dropped on the
Face of artic,
And dropped again,
On the sun,

I feel a cold blizzard
Occupying my being,
Leaving me to suffer,
Until time passes on,

I hear others speak,
Of what they see,
They judge without-
Hesitation,

Yet I lay here quietly,
For I do not defend
Myself again

The reason for my silence,
Is not fear of talking,
It is the sins that I have done,
That keeps me in silence.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
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1 posted 2004-05-12 01:00 AM


wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow ,,,awesome ,,i dont know why they dont reply ,they cant see great i guess ..omg this is amazing keep it upp please keep writting ....

love and respect

peace


I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

2 posted 2004-05-12 09:13 PM


everything can be viewed as evil in the right light, however in the wrong light everything can be seen as good.

remember not to hide because of the sins you have commited for they will not hide behind theirs if they come for you.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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