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Truth turned Devil
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Truth turned Devil |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You want to see hell, Look no further, As the maggots spread- Waste within your mind, Feel it with greed - On your sanity they feed, Leeches suck at your toes, Till they expose your naked Bones, which are chewed By the hounds of hell, Within your sleep, Each death toll creeps, As you sink deep within, Nightmares shackling Cladding the devil’s call, You wish to stop seeing, Believing that this is true, Well don’t look now, But your soul has just left, As it seeps through devils Finger, washing his feet, Forever stained are you with Cowering belief. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
But your soul has just left, As it seeps through devils Finger, washing his feet, Forever stained are you with Cowering belief Loved it. Great dark poetry. My turn now  and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
I keep being drawn to this poem, the more I read it, the more I like it. Adding to library. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
thank you for the comments. I currently have chicken pox and I am 23. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like this alot. This was very well written. I loved the imagery, even thoguh it was a bit gruesome! ~lol~ Keep up the good work... chicken pox.. itchy huh? ~lol~ I had those when i was five. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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