navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #4 » How Often
Dark Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic How Often Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
lil cherry
Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2004-05-06 11:29 PM


How often I’ve wept
My silent tears
Of desperation
To conquer
My evils

Curled up in a corner
Listening as my own breath
Dances in the air

Terrified
That my savior
Is only in my mind

Not strong enough
To bring those evils down


© Copyright 2004 Angel - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-05-06 11:51 PM


Wow, i can totally relate. I like the part about being scared that your only savor is only in your head. I know exactly what you mean. I think... ~lol~ Amazing.. like i said b4, u r very talented...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

lil cherry
Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.
2 posted 2004-05-07 12:22 PM


alright, apparently u posted a reply to my poem "scars"  unfortunatly i can't figure out how to see that reply cuz i can't seem to find that poem since it's from a really long time ago, or at least it was in teen poetry #6, so you can either, tell me how to find it, or just let me know in here what u said, that is if it really matters to you to let me know your opinion, which i of course would love to hear.  anyways, thanks for your interest.
~~*Angel*~~

lil cherry
Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.
3 posted 2004-05-07 12:22 PM


by the way i've read a few of yours and they're really good. i only replied to one, but you're very talented.
~~*Angel*~~

EliJah
New Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 8

4 posted 2004-05-07 11:19 AM


a very universal topic but do not worry, your saviour is real, the only thing thats real
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #4 » How Often

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary