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*Inque Monroe*
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since 2003-10-18
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0 posted 2004-05-06 08:56 PM


(This is new, please reply!!!)


I’m your fallen angel from above,,
You’re my love from beyond,
Any thoughts of loneliness have become so far gone,
The moment you held me in your arms
Your beautiful eyes and your soft touch makes me
Feel like I’m at home
For so long I hid in the shadows
For fear of being used
Then you come and embraced away my fears,

I’m your fallen angel from above
You’re my love from beyond
And with your love and your trust
I feel I can do anything
They always told me I was worthless
A piece of scum that could never be good
But you,
You changed that,
You showed them my worth

I’m your angel
And you’re my love
And together,
We’ll show the world…the true meaning of love



What does it matter, we will all die in the end anyway.

© Copyright 2004 Victoria Ware - All Rights Reserved
Soul Sepulchre
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since 2003-10-19
Posts 29
Tennessee, USA
1 posted 2004-05-06 10:36 PM


YAYYYYYYYY!!! Yet another ingenius poem from my baby. Keep up the good work honey - you just keep on rolling out amazing poem after amazing poem. :-D, I will never ever stop reading or liking them. I love you honey, remember that.

Yours truly,
Jeremy.

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06
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Boise Idaho
2 posted 2004-05-07 07:45 PM


This is a wonderful poem, i truly enjoyed it, great job

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth
3 posted 2004-05-08 04:19 PM


omg this  is great sweet ..and awesome..keep it upp...

lovezz

peace sis

Paper Tiger
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since 2003-09-28
Posts 77

4 posted 2004-05-09 11:04 PM


This piece seemed a little over-the-top to me (just being honest).  Nevertheless, a very nice read indeed.

We see much, observe little, and perceive less.

*Inque Monroe*
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5 posted 2004-05-10 06:02 PM


what do you mean over the top
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