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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-05-02 06:43 PM



i hate you more,
for every tear i cried for you.

i hate you more ,
for every dream you told me we will do.

i hate you more,
for every look i took just wasting memorizes thinking of you.

i hate you more,
for every minute i wasted talking to you.

i hate you more,
for every sec i was thinking of you,

i hate you more,
because you made me fall into your lies.

BUTi now,i hate you more than i ever loved you,
because you forced me to lie to my family and friends,and i lost everything i have..


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1 posted 2004-05-02 08:04 PM


i hope this is not something u went through..
kissa~rachelle
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2 posted 2004-05-02 10:22 PM


I am very sorry. He didnt force you to do this, but i know what you  mean. Very well written, you expressed your feelings well.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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3 posted 2004-05-02 11:15 PM


oh thank soo much .,,,,for ur replies....i wrote this poem acutally like few hours ago,,,im going through alotttt..and i wish i never met internet or never met guyz lololol...welll thanks again..lovesss
spritrider87
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4 posted 2004-05-07 01:20 PM


this is really good. i had this happen to me. he did force me too. oh well.... keep writing.

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

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