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Dark Poetry #4

Story time

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-05-02 06:17 PM

I can’t rest at night,
Even when life is fine,
And I can enjoy the test of time,

I wonder often,
Why I live this life,
And why I want a wife,

I just want to be alone,
And just be able to breath,
And no drama in the end,

I lived on my own,
I often wonder, can I grow,
Old on my own?

How often I thought,
About killing myself,
In the end I would end,
Up hurting myself,

This feeling grows old,
But the pain remains strong,
To this story I am sold.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-02 06:19 PM

wow....love it...its soo cute but the rhyming sounded kinda forced...but its gr88 lovez

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-02 10:29 PM

I agree, the rhyming did sound forced, but the poem itself was good. Nice write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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