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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-05-02 12:40 PM



i wish i could run away from everyone.
people are wanting me to go wayz and wayz..

but i cant agree .
who should i go with?

i dont want to hurt anyone ..but i ratherhurt myself..

who should i go with??
people say we care ,but can i trust them?

people say we love,how can i not know the truth?
i been with them all my life...

but maybe they want something..
maybe they want even more than anything..

im scared to live alone ..im scared to fail everyone with my stupid mind...

should i go with people who helped me and truly loved me,but what if they are just going to play a game on me??...

im scaredd!!!!

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2004-05-07 12:42 PM


cool piece
Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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2 posted 2004-05-07 07:38 PM


good write, i'm new here i'd love your opinion on my works...i hope to hear from you soon

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3 posted 2004-05-10 12:06 PM


Nice work. we all feel this way sometimes.
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2004-05-10 12:49 PM


this is like someting a little girl would write after coming out of somewhere like Iraq.  It sounds sweet and innocent and like its searching for someone to trust

GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

LucidityNow
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5 posted 2004-05-10 08:16 AM


Wonderful poetry! Forget other people. Think for yourself, whatever is ethical and moral to you, is what is right. Don't let anybody ever tell you otherwise.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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6 posted 2004-05-10 05:15 PM


hi,,
well thank u all for ur replies...

green ..its not right for you to say that...a girl from iraq??...why r u judging when u cant see??...even though im not from iraq but i respect people from iraq and people in america ..im not races ..so please just respect alittle ,,,just alittle .....i was raised in america and still am an american,and i truly dont think people from america are better than the people in iraq or even better than anyone..no-1 is better than any-1 and u have to know that...just give alittle love to the world,and especiallly urself...well thank u anywayz and may god bless u all..

peace

wth all my  love and respect

SwEeTnSeXy18
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7 posted 2004-06-04 12:43 PM


Sweet:
I thought this was really good. It made me think thats for sure. I agree everyone is equal! Take care

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


kissa~rachelle
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8 posted 2004-06-04 12:53 PM


This was good. I liked it. The flow was a litle edgy, but all in all it was pretty good!

P  A  E   U   !!! ~lol~
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Kissa-

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