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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-29 01:31 AM



when ever i seee my life go on so fast
i get scared

when the flower in my body bleeds.
i get scared

even when i speak ,even when i sing ,my tears run!!

even when i am happy i get scared of the happiness will cost me death.

im scared of this painful world..im scared of this beautiful smile that will never end of pain..

im scared he will make me cheaper that i dont cost anything but pain.

im scared my dreams will just disspear when i just smile for one minute..

when ever i feel im lonely nothing matters but death ,i laugh but a face without a heart..

even when im with him im scared he will per-tarde me with nothing but pain..

im scared!!!!!!!!!!

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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
1 posted 2004-04-30 09:21 AM


this is nice.... although im not really sure why you are scared of life.  you only life once so live it to the full.... i felt like this once, i was told
'live life as if you will die tomorow, but love as if you will live forever.'
i now pass this phrase on to you, use it as you wish.
keep up the writing.
Mel

spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH
2 posted 2004-04-30 09:22 AM


hey dont give up hope just yet. i know what it is like to be afraid of everything. it doesnt feel good either. im still scared but i dont pretend im not anymore. just dont give up. heres my e-mail if you want to talk. spritrider87@yahoo.com later

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
3 posted 2004-04-30 07:32 PM


welll thank u all for these wonderful comments....
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