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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-04-28 12:47 PM





These halls of walls
are screaming

there is no art here

poetry does not write,
it merely richochets
on barewhite fences
that grow and encircle me

this voice is drowning;

a soul withering
into a  hollow pocket
as an according is folding,

there is no air here;
just black deadweight smoke

smothering fumes of enclosure;

let me out

over the  wind i run; i scream

will you hear my echo
if i leap?


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-29-2004 07:35 AM).]

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bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
1 posted 2004-04-29 08:27 PM


This is different
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-04-29 08:31 PM


thanks babe for pulling me up for air
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2004-04-29 09:44 PM


This is outstanding, for it delves. Reaching deep within. Touching that plane other than the normal. Where others avoid because it's not. Bravo!! Great write.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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