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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
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0 posted 2004-04-25 06:51 AM



you dont know what
tis like to grow up
having only one friend
having no childhood
growing up seven years
before my time

you dont know
what its like
to be treated
as if your 18....
until on explanation
that your only 16

you dont know what
its like to have
no one to talk to
about stuff like
suicide to

you dont know
how i feel
you dont know
my life

you dont know
me at all

so this is me but what do you care about that????

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Xeonox
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1 posted 2004-04-25 01:58 PM


I know what it feels like because I had to grow up under those conditions.

Good write. You are not alone.

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2004-04-26 12:37 PM


thanks xeonox.
i know i cant possibly be alone but it feels that way sometimes.
thanks for replying.
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-04-28 12:44 PM


peace and love to you
and you need to be speaking to someone about what's going on; someone who can help

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