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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-04-22 04:39 AM



I feel lost and lonely
when the breeze blows through
I'm left cold and alone
My arms without you

I need you like water everyday
like when i wrap myself into thought
I'm the thirst
and your the draught

I yearn for your touch
when your music fills my soul
I'm drowning in the notes
Of your sweet rock and roll

I ache for your smile
when you laugh at our life
I'm biting my lip
as you speak of your wife

I block out your pleasure
when you speak of that other
I'm silenced by pain
as my heart you smother

I dream of a time
when we are but ours
I'm safe once again
safe in your arms

I look in your eyes
when you bid me goodbye
I'm untouchable to you
and i wish i knew why

*Writers Note* TRUE STORY.

Why can't you see?

LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

© Copyright 2004 L - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-04-22 08:24 PM


This was great, nice second paragraph. Just a tad confused on the true story thing, could you tell me?

Luv,
Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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