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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-04-19 07:03 PM



I'm just that girl
in the backround
that nobody wants to recognise
and ignores me

And as i watch from my corner
all i want is to be apart of the life
everyone in here lives
day in day out
loving and living the life they have

Love was just so overrated
i tried it one time
but came out heartbroken
and dead with pain

and these scars i bear from your lies
bind me to this cold and lifeless fate
While i lie here lost and unwanted
you lie there
with another locked in you arms

I wonder if she know's what you have in store for her
i wonder if she knows ur no more than a cheap sleeze looking for but one thing
I wonder if i could tell her
warn her of you

but i'm just that girl
and that girl who has no life
doesnt want to speak again
and just wants to be forgotten

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

© Copyright 2004 L - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
1 posted 2004-04-19 07:31 PM


wowwwwwwwww...another gr88 1 keep it upp
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-04-19 10:43 PM


amazing... still in hong kong??? Do u know chinese or hongkongese or whatever they speak up there??? ~lol~ yea, anyways... amazing write, once agin./

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-04-20 02:27 AM


lol i'm still in new zealand
its sophie aka darkness_witch hu is in hong kong. but i think shes either in london or france now.

Thank you, you both have been great supporters of my poems and im thankful

LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-04-20 08:11 PM


Once again, my Laurie Lor, you have never failed to disappoint. Especially with this poem, I can sooooooooooo easily relate to it. The story of my life, or rather what I wish wasn't. Anyway, I bet Sophilo's having a great time, lucky bugger in France, or London.....she'll be in L.A next week I think.

Ciao,
Hollow,
Hollow who relates

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
5 posted 2004-04-20 08:14 PM


r u online?
come on msn
thanx btw

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

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