»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
Where?
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
Where? |
|
|
Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163
|
Where? Where my i find life? Where can i live? Where is that place of peace i can never find? Why can't you leave me alone Your killing me Killing me from the inside out Alone I stand Naked against the world The world deemed me unworthy But made be live Liveing this life No were to go Why do i stay, why don't i go Flee from life free from here Death encopasing Taking all Nothing left, nothing to lose Falling, Falling to the ground dead changed were to where, thx for telling me Vagabon the Lost One [This message has been edited by Vagabond (04-21-2004 08:03 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Jerome Hollon - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
um i think u mean Where. not were The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near. |
||
|
Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Actually Lor, I think he meant were. Changed were to where Not.... Changed where to where That would have sounded strange, if it that's what he meant. Nice work Vagabond. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
||
|
Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
thank you Vagabon the Lost One |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
