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Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

0 posted 2004-04-17 12:41 PM

I sit in this strange, cold darkeness
Where my heart aches of rejection of Love
For I have realised I have been left alone, in anguish
Without a soul thereof
But with the voices I overhear

I walk the thin lines of sanity and imagination
A reality I have not yet learned to understand
For my emotions are of sick revelations
Where my heart screams, "Death here I am!"
We are all dressed up for him to feel

I hear the cries of this one silent night
Still wrapped up in the eyes of the moon and silent noises
For the sound of our broken hearts in the darkest light
Forever shall grant our sorrow's wages
Whilst I kiss your mouth, though unreal

So alone, I continue to drown
Surrounded by the cold water, so solitary
But stuck in the thoughts of you unendowed
In a limbo of weeping requiem, so lonelily
As I sit in this strange, cold darkness

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-04-18 05:13 AM

This is beautiful...loved it, adding it for sure!

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

2 posted 2004-04-18 10:45 AM

Thank you!!!

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2004-04-27 05:22 PM

hey I really like this too, you are a very good poet! =)

- River

sleep my precious slumber

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-04-28 02:31 AM

Wow, this is amazing I loved it and saved it. Keep up the good work, you are an awesome poet.

Hollow

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

5 posted 2004-04-28 07:40 AM

tis is amazing. your imagery is so enthralling.... the images in my head have more impact than the words on my screen....
you have amazing talent... keep up the writing.
mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2004-04-28 04:31 PM

The imagery,... wow! You are very very talented! This is soo... beautiful.
*i'm definetely adding!!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

7 posted 2004-05-02 07:29 PM

Wow, I'm really glad ya'll liked this write! You guys are really nice!

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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