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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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0 posted 2004-04-16 11:51 PM



I know that we are meant to be,
maybe not now,
but someday I'll be the one in your arms.
Someday, somehow.
Eversince you first looked into my eyes,
I knew we were meant to be.
The way you could see my every thought,
sent chills through every inch of me.
Your smile is like a hurricane,
washing all my pain away,
Your eyes,
looking into mine,
makes it hard to find any words to say.
But i didnt have to,
i told you with my eyes,
and i know that you saw
Just like i know
you saw the tears streaming down my face,
and how you knew i wanted to leave,
to go to a better place.
sometimes i still want to leave,
when i see you and her together,
and remember how lost i felt,
thinking you had left me forever.
I just wanted to say,
how much i will always care,
how much i will always love you,
and how my heart,
will always have a place for you there.

Kissa

* i just wrote this today, and i'm not sure how good it is.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2004-04-18 05:14 AM


i think this is pretty good, it haas a nice flow to it...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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