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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-04-16 05:32 PM

From a titled journal
lost,
within Ego stricken pages, rehearsed.
A silhouette
known to darkness,
the darkest ever yet.
The one who dances
during our lowest.
The one who ingests
all reality,
from what we never did get.
Now finds himself curdling,
as our own skin
screams.
With subsequent layers
revealing the truth
to what
we really are.
Why?
Would I not, as
the feast is now
about me.
Please take me back.
Please,
I will use different colors
And open my windows.
I will call to the truth
when the Sun sets for the final.
My room,
will be clean.
I promise.
Please.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-04-16 05:46 PM

wow, what are you fighting to keep? this is very good, very good...good to see you back here, i love this piece, addinf it for sure. did i saw wow!

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2004-04-27 05:20 PM

I agree with eor, i think this is a very intriguing poem =) keep it up!

- River

sleep my precious slumber

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-04-28 02:35 AM

Whoa, blew me away! This was excellent,I'm intereseted. Great imagery, I've saved it!

Hollow

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2004-04-29 04:42 PM

eor, Thanks for stopping by. Good to hear from you again. When we know what we have to do, and don't...and when it's all over, can we go back? Thanks again man. Later.

wayne

River, Thanks for the read and comments. I'll be back. Thanks again.

wayne

Hollow, Thanks for the much appreciated comment. A poet needs that once in awhile. Thanks again.

wayne,
Thanks all!!-- Many more doors to enter and journeys to go. Be back soon.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

5 posted 2004-05-14 05:13 PM

good poem

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