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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
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0 posted 2004-04-13 10:37 PM


(This is as true as I can get it. I really am sorry, you know who you are. Yeah I'm sorry. Forgive me?)

Sorry,
Contrite apology,
You know I’m talking to you,
Listen, Consider, Observe, and Regard.
Let us bury the hatchet,
Forget the words I’ve spoken,
I know you won’t,
But I have to try.

Sorry,
Making amends,
You know I’m talking to you,
Healing the wounds without permission,
If you want to keep this rift,
Between us and let it slaughter,
What we once had,
Then I’ll walk away.

Sorry,
Forgive me,
You know I’m talking to you,
Turn your back on what we had,
Or simply lose the will to fight,
I was honest then and still am,
But now I will forget,
If you do.

Sorry.  

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-14 12:46 PM


Hope your apology finds the ears it was meant for....
I know what its like to need to say "im sorry"...good write

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-04-14 02:34 AM


already forgotten courts

read my email

i am also sorry

hopefully we can catch up soon

i really am sorry  

LUV LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-04-14 08:57 PM


I'm sorry too, glad you read this. You know your one of my best friends. *Hugs*

Luv,
Aggs,
Hollow,
Courtney. xxx

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2004-04-14 10:40 PM


hey that works. I wrote something like this...I know, sometimes sorry doesn't seem like enough and it hurts...but it's good that you can work with the words you have. good write... (and btw, i'm glad you two worked it out )

       - River


sleep my precious slumber

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