»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
an absence
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
an absence |
|
|
wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
|
Sitting among dusty woodpiles, the porcelain cracking in a smile. inattentive the sunshine filters daydreams from the outside. The cot is bare and absent of laughter The long corridors are still. Only the hazy soil remembers the feel Of the sharpening footsteps, The lively souls "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Claire Lucille - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
this is deep...I like it =) *goes back and reads it again* - River sleep my precious slumber |
||
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
pure poetry  awesome write wings ....... |
||
|
wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
aww, thank you both...my capitals are messed up all over the place though...sorry about that... |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I like this one a LOT ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
||
|
wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
awww,  thanks marge, v. sweet of you..."more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
