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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
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0 posted 2004-04-12 07:51 PM



I am no one,
I am nothing,
I am just something with a name,
A look,
A sight,
You will not see me in the light,
You will not notice me in the dark,
I am no one,
If you walk in the moonlight,
You will see the shadow of the thing called I,
But if you face me,
You will not see the thing of myself,
I am no one,
You will not see me at school or work,
You will not notice me in an alley or bar,
If you are in sight of anyone,
I will see you,
But you will not see the shadow of I,
I am no one,
This is who I shall always remain,
A shadow,
Something that just is,
Something that doesn't truly exist,
I am no one.

~*Faries exist.*~

© Copyright 2004 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
aujussy wolf
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since 2003-08-09
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1 posted 2004-04-12 10:48 PM


you get right to the point don't ya
...strong expression , good work fg
-wolf

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-04-12 11:27 PM


Very strong emotion in this...

*sometimes, it hurts less to be a no one.*

Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
3 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 PM


wow, this is pretty good, i like it, couldn't have said it better myself.

     - River

sleep my precious slumber

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
4 posted 2004-05-02 06:13 PM


woooooooooooooooooww....truly gr88 keep it up..

p.,s
rememeber we are all something...god made us to be something or are something ..just hang in there and you willl be someone and actually you are someone ,,your a poetrist..i love it keep it upploves

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06
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Boise Idaho
5 posted 2004-05-07 07:40 PM


good job, i can emphasize with the loneliness for i have felt that way often that i am noone.

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