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*Inque Monroe*
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0 posted 2004-04-12 07:16 PM



(This poem was written December 21st, 2002. Its not all that great please reply, this was in the depth of my depression and I believe my ability to write has somewhat become better over the last 2 years, so please read and repond fyi:it does not promote any type of violence)

   Always alone, always, never to be with anyone always to hold feelings with in myself.

The world seems cold and unfeeling. Alone, always, terribly cold, terribly terribly cold.

I just want to end it all. But I cannot, why, I do not know.

I try but the knife never penetrates my heart.

Never to end it all, always to suffer.

Why?
Only the ones who want to live should.

Not I.  

Yet it won’t end, it just goes on and on. Never to stop beating, even if it did it wouldn’t matter.

I do not need a heart to survive. I just do.

Why?

Because I am alone.

© Copyright 2004 Victoria Ware - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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1 posted 2004-04-12 11:29 PM


wow... that is exactly how i am feeling right now. I just want to end it... but i cant, and i dont know why. Very amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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