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Neurotically yours
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Neurotically yours |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Unrepaired; innocence that used to my own ran away with my soul. Leaving me behind to soar with my broken, blood-soaked wings. A life full of dissension and diminutioned happiness creates a mask, one in which I hide behind to free me from what I've become; obsolete. Dishonest; an angst that flows so elegantly rapes me. Hidden in a darkened light, who I once was trudges down my tear-paved path. Lost in an advertised realm of life's diease; drugs and alcohol, I close my eyes to accept this floaty feeling. Beautifully delicate I am to you, but why must my diminished hope effect you so. I became a complete perfection in your eyes, but this somber world devours me. You cannot see the pain in which any high rescues me from, Gently I smile as I openly caress my true lover; death's mercenary. His slightest touch makes me lose myself into him, laying in his arms I silently sigh in complete ecstasy, Im neurotically yours. * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
... I had a flighty soul myself.... I like the way this poem flows... how there are no holes... |
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Sass Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 21 |
Wow. Your poem captured me in every way! You truly have talent. I am so impressed. I sat reading with my mouth open. The choice in words and the way it flows...awesome job! |
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