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*Inque Monroe*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 43
No where special

0 posted 2004-03-30 08:50 PM

(Not promoting suicide,mearly a feeling. This one if from January 31, 2004, please post lots of replies, I wanna know if I am any good. Thanks. Inque.)

I've made up my mind
I want to die
I want to close my eyes

In this darkness, the cold holds me down
I try to fight, but its no use at all.
The hate grows anew and the innnocent ones pay.
They take us and make us
and we are their prey

We are all insane
Mad, inside,
the mind slowing turning
slowing with time.
Until a small light
comes to our eyes
we can finish ourselves
it always worth a try

it may take some pain
it may take some time
but in the end
we're no longer blind

we go to a place where its
always warm
where the evil pay
and the good can play
we are neither anymore
we join the flames
and we play games
and here in hell
where there are no inncocent
the innocent suffer, no more.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-03-30 10:11 PM

I like that concept. About how there are no innocent in hell, so the innocent cant suffer. Very kool. I really liked this poem.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-03-30 11:10 PM

i feel exactly like that as well.

well done. very well written.

i need somebody and always this sick strange darkness comes creeping on so haunting every time

toxic_outroar
New Member

since 2004-03-22

Posts 6

3 posted 2004-04-06 12:44 PM

A very good poem , show's real emotions, these are not just words placed together.

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

4 posted 2004-05-14 01:16 AM

a very interesting poem...and i really enjoyed it please keep posting..i'd love to read more of your work

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