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RaBBiT_K
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since 2004-03-28
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0 posted 2004-03-30 02:30 PM



I see you watching me,
Every now and then,
I see you see me bleed,
Wondering if I'll be whole again,

I'd rather be by myself,
Alone and in the dark,
I never did want your help,
I prefer silence in my heart,

I know you care, and that you're always there,
But your love is more then I can take,
I just can't bare, your standing there,
My sanity is at stake,

Leave me alone, on my own,
I need to be alone.

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-30 10:08 PM


I know how it feels, to want to just be alone, not wanting to let people in. I really like this poem, a lot.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
2 posted 2004-05-02 06:06 PM


i know its alittle too late for replies on this poem but i truly loved i keep it upp
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3 posted 2004-05-02 06:10 PM


nice poem.dark indeed.


Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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4 posted 2004-05-07 12:51 PM


a very dark poem...alone in the world is never a way to go take it from me i've been there...

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EliJah
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since 2004-05-07
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5 posted 2004-05-07 11:18 AM


i can relate, i'm glad to read any poetry that helps me understand ppl better and i think this did
keep it up

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