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coyote
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0 posted 2004-12-21 08:41 AM



I am awakened
in a blinding moment
by electric veins
flash flooding black sky

fear finds a voice
but the sound drowns
inside rolling thunder

my stricken nerves
lie quivering
among shattered pieces
of reflex memory

as day breaks
and the gods begin to weep
I hide my nakedness
in the shadows
of their tears

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

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1 posted 2004-12-21 10:04 AM


LOVE THIS!!!

wow....

EveGnosis
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2 posted 2004-12-21 11:35 AM


this was awesome, coyote!! yes!! i feel this in my very lifeforce!

i prefer the feeling of nakedness. it is the homelife of choice. my truest friends must do the same when they visit...lol. we sit indian style and talk for hours, unabashed by what is most beautiful.

you are a genius/phenom writer.

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
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New Zealand
3 posted 2004-12-21 05:51 PM


OMG HOW COOOOOOOOOL IS THAT????
woah, now that was some great writing

fantastic. love it

laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
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4 posted 2004-12-21 09:07 PM


*sigh* ahhhh now that was a very very very great poem

loved it, you got some serious talent there.

love and empathy
sophie

merry christmas

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

coyote
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5 posted 2004-12-22 07:20 PM


Thanks for reading and for your kind and supportive comments my friends.

The windowpane is crystaline and clear.

Happy Holidays.

CB 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

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