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ShannonMarie
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since 2003-09-09
Posts 55
in a state of being

0 posted 2004-03-16 11:48 PM


I Love You B.C



I've written many poems
to say how I feel
I have put them to music
to show that my feelings were real.

I have sang you a lulaby
of my undying desire and grace
my hearts words has brought you to tears
I have dried your face.

I have only asked one thing from you
in return for all I do
that you never be like him
never hit and be untrue.

I have felt the pain that love can bring
and the pain of abuse
the bruises and scars
it is time to call a truse

no longer am I his "bitch"
thats hard for me to say
I did as I was told
I have known no other way

then you came along
and I stood in total shock
after 5 years of friendship you take me away
and your love rewinds the clock.

5 years of loving eachother
from a distance of course
so I gave in and left him
for this I have no remorse

you make my life more complete
each and every day
you constantly say you love and need me
I hope it stays this way.

© Copyright 2004 Shannon Marie - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-16 11:53 PM


oh wow. I can really feel your hurt, and...hope. I really love this poem. I am so sorry about the abuse you went through, and i am happy you had the strength to overcome it!! You have to be so strong to get away from a situation like that. I dont know you, but i am proud of you. I hope everthing works out ood with you and you... uh... "freind" ~lol~


I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

ShannonMarie
Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55
in a state of being
2 posted 2004-03-16 11:57 PM


thank you, it took a lot to get out... easy to fall in though sux, but... thank you.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-03-21 10:07 PM


touching piece
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