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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-03-13 06:56 PM


i think the world was made for you and me
breathe it in
let it corupt you
this world of pain
of greed
i think this world was made for you and me
neglected children
with parents that beat them,
with every word that leaves their mouths
another bruise..
high on life they say.
i'm not high on life
i'm high off you
i think this world was made for you and me
does it burn like acid through your soul
it should
12 year old whores
selling themselves for candy

"you want a good time"


i think this world was made for you and me,baby..

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Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2004-03-13 08:41 PM


very...truthful.
I enjoyed the honesty.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-03-14 12:04 PM


brutal honesty. I like it.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
3 posted 2004-03-14 03:17 PM


wow, this is some potent stuff...I really like it! ..."I'm high off you"...that's gonna stick in my head for a while, lol. take care chica

         - River

sleep my precious slumber

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