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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-03-11 01:32 AM


Screaming into the night
feeling numb and locked up tight
All i need is you right here
The touch of your hand, the smell of your hair
An aching hole of a missing heart
it bleeds and breaks now we're apart
All i know is how breath
but anything else is beneath me
But the pain of losing you
Is still wanting you near
But your still gone

...and i'm still here

If you could step into my head, tell me would you still know me?
And if you woke up in my bed, tell me then would you hold me? -3 Doors Down

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2004-03-11 04:24 PM


"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-03-11 07:53 PM


Awww.... that is soo... sweet!!
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-03-11 10:32 PM


Lovie its sad ......i hope no one leaves u alone like that...lonely.........:'(

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
4 posted 2004-03-13 11:56 AM


Very nice write. If I were in the mood to think, I'd tell you why. But, suffice to say, you did it right.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-03-22 04:26 AM


ouch...
darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
6 posted 2004-03-24 12:56 PM


i go thru that too often.

im still here

Vulgarity removed from signature - Ron

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
7 posted 2004-03-28 03:39 PM


awwwwwww....*sniff* that's really sad, i know what it's like. i'm sorry if you've ever felt that way, it sux. great write, you expressed this feeling well.

       - River

sleep my precious slumber

lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
va
8 posted 2007-05-26 03:08 PM


aww. it' so sad. I almost cried.great job.

Becca.

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