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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
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0 posted 2004-03-09 11:43 PM


Beaten black and blue,
Lying dissipated on the ground,
The concrete embedded into my cheek,
Manic laughter sounding above my head,
I’m still holding on,
To what I have left,
If I have anything,
Anyone.

Crossing over to the darkness,
Hardly breathing through the mist,
The anger wrapping up my fragile body,
Psychotic laughter getting further and further away,
I’m hanging by a thread,
To the cliff of your sanity,
If you have any,
Left.

Fading into the background unnoticed,
I try to scream out but I’m ignored,
The poisonous fog confusing me,
Crazy laughter cinched in the reality,
I had to let go,
Now I’m trapped,
But no one can hear me.

"What is it about the dark places that draw my spirit in? The agony? The silent shadows? I would give up my perfect destiny to know."


© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
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1 posted 2004-03-11 01:15 AM


To the cliff of your sanity,
If you have any,
Left.

Sounds familiar dont it?

lol hope soph isnt too angus at that

NICE THO

LOR

If you could step into my head, tell me would you still know me?
And if you woke up in my bed, tell me then would you hold me? -3 Doors Down

Hollow_Emptiness
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2 posted 2004-03-11 10:28 PM


Huh? familiar........not really.....did soph write something like that?????

If she did tell her i am sooooo sorry i didn't know and i can't remember.....eeeeek i didn't copy her....i swear

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

silhouetted
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3 posted 2004-04-13 06:04 PM


yer sophies poem hatred

Reaching
His hand grabs mine
As he pulls me
From where I
Clung to my cliff of
Sanity

great piece of work that one

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
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4 posted 2004-04-13 10:24 PM


Lor. Dont hate me. Please.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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