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promise me promises |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
A hollowed man has come today A face so cheap it makes you pay Are you listening now? Is it glistening? Are you interested in a piece of me now? Is this who the void will become? A hand astray, to take the day Your innocence is just a pretty guilt Boom, boom, speaker man Cry, cry, all you weaker than Pressed against the glass He’s aglow with stupidity Hanging on, but dying out Breath by breath, I watch him fade A foggy window “Let me breathe” He’ll beg, he’ll plead What a timelessly forgettable moment “Promise me promises” I wish you well Don’t drown too far down Attempted temptation true and false Let the river tell us all Sting, stitch, grow, itch Sting, stitch, grow, itch A hollowed man has come today He’ll spread his wings And he’ll lift the blaze As he burns he’ll turn to say “I took the world to the other place” Rib expanders They let the wretches out New demanders They burn the bridges down Implore A broken man has come today Took your butterfly wings away You shouldn’t ever be okay Not ever…again |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I love the last stanza, its like its about me. I just really relate. Your amazing. This is amazing. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was SO bad! I mean in a good way!! ~lol~ Like, bad as in AWESOME!! This poem rocked my sox off! It was beautifully written and was just so... whats the word i'm looking for...imaginative and amazing! Very kewl. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write ryan, i enjoyed this very much "So what befalls the flawless? |
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