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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-03-09 03:07 AM

I want something real
I don't want senseless eyes
Or fathomless hands of glory
but hands of wisdom and knowledge

I want some kind of option
I don't want cold orders for me to follow
Or irritating mouths spitting lies
but mouths speaking of love and light

I want some infatuation
I don't want pathetic excuses for passion
Or teasing lips of malice
but lips of sweet devouring seduction

I want some kind of hiding
I don't want to be left in the cold to fend for myself
Or be told im not strong enough
but be told i can defeat anything

I want someone genuine
I dont want to find a drop dead gorgeous sleaze
Or 'gods gift to women' types
But find someone who knows who he is and doesnt apoligise for it

And i want sometimes more than I can have
But I don't want to go back
Or run helplessy into your arms
but run away, and move on.

I you could step into my head, tell me would you still know me?
And if you woke up in my bed, tell me then would you hold me? -3 Doors Down

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-03-09 04:44 AM

You should be proud of this and claim it loud.

All of it, but? I do choose favorite lines from time to time and I love this:

:I don't want senseless eyes
Or fathomless hands of glory
but hands of wisdom and knowledge"

Lovely.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-03-09 11:29 PM

every girl can relate to this work Lor......
this was definately my favourite part....

"I don't want pathetic excuses for passion
Or teasing lips of malice
but lips of sweet devouring seduction"

very saucy,
Courts

"What is it about the dark places that draw my spirit in? The agony? The silent shadows? I would give up my perfect destiny to know."

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-03-10 12:11 PM

powerful.....

very nice.

Vulgarity removed from signature - Ron

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

4 posted 2004-03-13 06:41 PM

Richly honest! and well put into words..These are the things we all seek, no?
But who all will admit it?
Thanx!

Click

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

5 posted 2007-05-26 03:04 PM

aww. we all want this. good thing is.. I think I finally found it. I love this one... you're so good at writing. please, keep them coming.. I love reading your work.

Becca.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

6 posted 2007-06-04 08:15 AM

Very well put!!!! Look forward to reading your work.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

7 posted 2007-06-04 11:54 AM

I really liked it! i can't wait to read more!

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