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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-03-08 10:56 PM



Why waste your words?
I'm not listening.
I'm tired of wasting my time
you're starting to get annoying.
My tempers started boiling.
I dont care anymore.
I am tired of crying for help,
only to be shut out.
My voice is horse.
My happiness forced.
Nothing matters.
Love served on silver platters,
Happiness in every face,
the world would be a better place.
Or would it.
I wouldnt know.
what you reap
is what you sow.
Or so i'm told.
The only happiness i find,
is knowing that in a hundred years,
I will have died.
No one remembers.
No one cares.
Everyone goes on
with their pathetic lives.
Into life they ignorantly dive.

~Vampire Kisses

I'm still working on this one.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

© Copyright 2004 Karissa - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-03-12 07:46 PM


i love it

i really do

LOR

If you could step into my head, tell me would you still know me?
And if you woke up in my bed, tell me then would you hold me? -3 Doors Down

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2004-03-13 03:59 AM


this is really depressing...nice write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

click1
Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
3 posted 2004-03-13 06:20 PM


Good write!!!  Well put!  What a perspective...you wrote it so I could see it.

                        Thank you!

Click

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