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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-03-05 11:54 PM


I'm not gonna let you
take me back into your world again.
I'm not gonna let you
seduce me with your charm.
You've gotten me once,
slipped past my security alarm.
You robbed me blind.

You took everything,
my soul.
My heart.
My happiness.
Things i have yet to find.

My wall was ten times strong.
My soul ten times dark.
My heart ten times cold.
but my fall was ten times hard.

All i am is an empty,
heartless shell.
This life i have,
is a living hell.
A living hell you created.

You played me,
played with my heart.
thats all you did,
from the very start.

you never loved me,
it was all a lie.
all you cared about was "gettin some"
your just another worthles guy.

You say you've changed,
but i know you have not,
you think with three words,
i can be bought.
Well, maybe your the same person,'
but i am not.
I love you means nothing to me
just three meaningless words,
that could hurt you for eternity.

~Vampire Kisses




I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2004-03-06 04:49 PM


powerful write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

click1
Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
2 posted 2004-03-14 06:10 PM


Good job! Like standing at the window....

    Thank you.

Click

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
3 posted 2004-03-15 03:41 PM


oooh...this one is...ouch. i liked it, very solid, great job =).

    - River

sleep my precious slumber

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