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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-12-21 04:27 AM



Its a little friction
A freight train through a tunnel
The power of being right
And a wand handed glass

A little curve
On top of a rushing smile
A solid figure
From reality
Into supernaturality

Hear the scream
When you're intentional
Open this tiny crack
And relax

Just be,
Happy,
Beautiful,
Jesus,
Love,

Understand and don't be confused
Listening to the ticks
What used to be has been transformed
And molded into me

My guitar's name is Jennifer.

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
1 posted 2004-12-21 11:43 AM


oh wow. epiphony happening here...
"time has a tendency to buff us about like delicate delinquents in fragile bottles that break..." but what is time? tick... tick... tick...
i like the word here. almost as much as now.
this was incredible, craig, and i will forever love the last two lines. they were awesome! and, by the way, my guitar's name is geraldine...i call her "deenie" for short, and i named my microphone mike...lol


of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-12-21 05:49 PM


duude! now that was cool. i love reading your poems! keep 'em coming

laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2004-12-21 09:09 PM


oooo loved it!!!
awesome opening line... it even sounds great to say it out loud... *gets shivers all over*

your stuff is always bloody great Craig

love and empathy
sophie

merry christmas

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-12-21 10:49 PM


Mikael, lol-  Yeah I believe I get the epiphony.  I say I believe because I'm not exactly sure, but I believe I get it.  And actually my guitar was being a pain so I was thinking about renaming it "Tom."  Tom sounds appropriate for something thats an aggravating pain in the rear, but I think its actually doing better with the new strings so maybe I should call it "Ashley".  

Laura- Thank you.  I love it when people enjoy my poetry, and then instead of saying something like, "dude, what the Hell are you talking about."  they say, "keep'em coming" Thats cool.  Thanks

Sophie- You know what would have been cooler?  If in your response you would have said, "Gets shivers FROM all over"  lol.  Thanks and merry Christ-mass to you too.  lol.

-GIS

My guitar's name is Jennifer.

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