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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-02-26 11:05 PM



i dont want to be in your arms
i dont want to feel your touch
i just want to be somewhere else

i dont want to hear you screams
i dont want to bear the pain
i just want to be alone tonight

i dont want to make a choice
i dont want whats best for us
i just want to get away

i dont want you near me now
i dont want you on the phone
i just want to forget you and all we've done

i dont want to hear your resistance
i dont want to anticapate a new start
i just want to end it now

i dont want you by my side
i dont want to hold you hand
i just want to leave you now

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

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darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2004-02-26 11:14 PM


amazing as usual.

gasp

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-02-27 04:17 PM


Amazin'. I like. Soemtimes ya just want to get away...from everything, you just wanna forget everything that was in the past, and you just want everything to be over. Yep. I know how it feels.

~Vampire Kisses  

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-02-27 08:09 PM


Wow, this is totally cool dude....................................................... (Just watched Finding Nemo ) Can't wait to see ya tonight,
luv,
Hollow

However long the night, the dawn will break.

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
4 posted 2004-03-02 07:37 PM


lvoe the way this comes from the heart..... i think everyone has had days and moments where they wish the past was erased.... but the thing is the past is the past and it cant be changed or erased...... keep up the writing and this is an amazing piece of poetry from your heart.

so this is me but what do you care about that????

Gothika_07
Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand
5 posted 2004-03-02 10:45 PM


wonderful oustanding
wot soph sed

bex xxoo

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
6 posted 2004-03-05 12:22 PM


oh hun...this is exactly how i felt not too long ago. I know exactly what you mean and i know it's hard...it's strange. don't let anyone bruise that beautiful heart of yours, and try not to look back to far into the past. Someday you will probably find someone that is worthy of your commitment and hopefully you will be happier. this was a good write, it hit home. have a great day.

       - River

sleep my precious slumber

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