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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
With your mind blown out of proportion What are you thinking about? Do you even care? Is it another part of life? Where are you? I stand in this intricate web That turns out as more of a painting Everything is connected And is, ironically all in one mind Literally the world dreamed up Existance Who am I? And where do I belong in this piece? I do totally belong without even slight doubt A steep rugged rock that rises above others But a rock never moves Has it always been above the others? Even this could be interpreted as arrogance I don't like it. Something eccentric This rat will sit Until I understand this trick But I'll never understand So I'll just sit And think about it My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"and when the seats are empty, i'll turn and walk into my spotlight, and finally find the place where i belong..." (g.russell) fabulous, craig! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
With your mind blown out of proportion What are you thinking about? Do you even care? Is it another part of life? Where are you? fantastic stuff, GIS. loved that bit there... reminded me of my favourite band's lead singers writing... sigh. you're the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wicked title... and fantastic words. Who am I? And where do I belong in this piece? I do totally belong without even slight doubt A steep rugged rock that rises above others But a rock never moves Has it always been above the others? Even this could be interpreted as arrogance thats my favourite stanza all though it all rocked keep up the great work!  love and empathy sophie merry christmas nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Mike- who exactly was g. russel? I'm not quite sure I've heard of who he is. But the lyrics sound cool. hehe. Laura- who is you favourite band? I'd like to know who I reminded you of. lol. Sophie- Thank you and yeah, I don't think I'm going to stop writing anytime soon. Thanks again. -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
brandon boyd, incubus... the lyrics are soooo amazing, and that stanza made me think, 'Oh! Sounds like an Incubus song!' love it! laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
graham russell. he wrote the song "a place where we belong" off the album "across the concrete sky"... it's air supply, and even though your words remind me more of white stripes, i dunno... the old crooners seemed to fit with this line...lol! (you'll haveta help me kick purity for turning me into an airhead) of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow. Thats pretty sweet if my lyrics sound like incubus lyrics. God is so cool. Figures purity would turn you on to airsupply. Hes talking about sending me some airsupply music, and I'm probably gonna like it. lol. And sure I'll help you kick him. Which music should we send him? -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey you, this is groovy! makes you sit....and think about it... - Bon Bon "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, especially when I write it and don't understand it still. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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