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nn
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 75


0 posted 2004-02-17 06:00 AM



Just a little more of strenght-and I'd be worthy of you
A little more of lenght-I could reach your heart
If I could know, if I could learn, if I was smart

That's for myself I'm calling out
So many strange feelings left behind
There's noone else around and I need so bad to shout
Just a little more of silence- and I could die

Why have I mixed it all in my mind?
Nobody has told me where to stop
Why am I so evil when I mean to be kind
A little more of fantasy-I could even cry

I'm a bound soul,a dejected one
Need a little more of heart to accept this state of mind and this condition too
I need just a little bit more of you

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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-02-20 03:39 AM


I loved this one

really good technique

keep it up


(just wanted to try it)

lol

LOR

"They'll love you just the way you are, if your perfect" - Alanis Morisette

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