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darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
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Underneath

0 posted 2004-02-14 06:13 PM


Into the dark I venture
Alone, on the edge

The whispered voices at my ear
Scream words of ferocity

The trees close in on me
Deranged faces tear at my sanity

Into the dark I venture
Alone, on the edge

Fallen angels at my feat
Death before my eyes

Isolated and hostile,
I rise to meet my deliverance

Petrified of the dark,
I am in hell alone

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-02-15 12:39 PM


wow, this is good chicka! "Deranged faces tear at my sanity" ..."I rise to meet my deliverance"  i love that! great job! =)

       - River

sleep my precious slumber

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-15 02:05 PM


Good write! Grover.
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
3 posted 2004-02-19 10:08 PM


"The trees close in on me
Deranged faces tear at my sanity"

This was good. I liked this part the best, it really stood out to me.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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