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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-02-14 04:18 PM

Darkness is on my side
deep thick eyes watching over me
penetrating thickness with uncertaintity

Darkness is watching
slipping through my mind
enveloping me so i cannot fight

Darkness is breathing
heavily into my soul
developing a sense of insanity

Darkness is fighting
slicing deep into my untarnished flesh
biting away all sense of feeling

Darkness is coming
to find a broken link
depriving me of sight

Darkness is screaming
rusting my ears with pain
lengthening my will to leave

And darkness has won.

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River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-02-14 04:38 PM

hey this is great! I'm sure our own darkness_witch will love this as well, lol.

- River

sleep my precious slumber

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-02-14 05:14 PM

lol she helped write it with me!!!

lol!!!
crack up

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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-02-14 05:52 PM

hehe!!!

lol thats quite good river... it came out well lor!!

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-02-19 10:11 PM

"Darkness is watching
slipping through my mind
enveloping me so i cannot fight"

Very nice.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

5 posted 2004-02-20 12:22 PM

Ohhhhhh love this is awesome, we are all being stalked. I will see you later. unless the untimely wrath of death descends upon me and takes away my very own dancing limbs and beating heart, then maybe, when the lightening crashes inside my body, i may not ver see you again. Oh except if there is such a poposterous thing as an afterlife, then maybe, i will see you again.

However long the night, the dawn will break.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

6 posted 2004-02-20 02:59 AM

LOL BUT THERE IS!!!
AND THERES A MAP TO GUIDE YOU AROUND THE WORLD!!
AND DANCING CLASSES

"They'll love you just the way you are, if your perfect" - Alanis Morisette

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2004-02-20 01:44 PM

I really love this poem. Especially the end.
Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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