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Lost is the life
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Lost is the life |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163
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Lost is the life once so innocent Lost is the joy from life Lost is the friends of me Gained is the hatred Gained is the pain Oh the pain, the great pain The pain I love The pain inside Lost is the happiness I miss it not. While the pain fills all Lost is the life Lost to humans Humans with the aid of darkness Vagabon the Lost One |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
i like it lor Silhouetted by Deception |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
yeah i definitly prefer this one to ur other two ones you posted cant pick why though. anyway. thanx for sharing this with us! keep rockin  darknessYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I know what you mean. i can't agree more with this. very good! - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
i like this one the better of my three i posted on friday 13 i was more in the mood when i posted this one Vagabon the Lost One |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I dont know why, this just.. doesnt really catch my attention. It took me reading it more than once for it to finally sink in, but once it did, i liked it. I could relate to it. "Gained is the hatred Gained is the pain Oh the pain, the great pain The pain I love The pain inside" I liked this part the best. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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