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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-02-09 11:28 PM

I sit here alone as i watch you use your hands in a way i wish i could be the victim of their seduction

I sit here alone as i watch you flick your hair in a way i wish i could run my fingers through its wild merciful tangle

I sit here alone as i watch you stretch your shirt up and down in a way i wish i could tear it away with my teeth

I sit here alone as i watch you lick your lips in a way i wish i could let my tongue trace the lines or your mouth

I sit here alone as i watch you laugh in a way i wish i wasnt the culprit of such a striking noise that attracted everyones hearts

I sit here alone as i watch you point your strong arm toward me in a way i wish i wasnt staring through your revolted expression

I sit here alone as i watch you walk in a way i wish i could follow such elegant, godlike strides

I sit here alone as i watch you dismiss me in a way i wish i had never seen such a heavenly creature

And still, i sit here alone.

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Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

1 posted 2004-02-09 11:38 PM

OOO LOVE VERY SAUCY!
it nearly broke mi heart, the "person" in this poem is so me right now (GRR MALES)
lovd it so much
bex

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-02-09 11:43 PM

lol bexus
oi mums on the fone so i will ring u wen she gets off

(DO NOT ASK WEN IT WILL BE CUZ I HAVE NO IDEA)

YES I NO!! MALES!!!!
grr

lol luv ya lor

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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-02-10 12:45 PM

I agree with Bex, very saucy.very cool

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-02-10 01:23 AM

MY GOD I UNDERTSAND
AHH IT DRIVES ME INSANE SOMETIMES

AHHHH

AHHHH

it happens every day and i swear img oign insane!

love the poem, the raw sauce and passion to it i love

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2004-02-10 07:27 PM

Very well written.

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